Zoe Altus (wireframe) and feedback from Kelly
- Love the title typeface
- Maybe indent the ingredients? For mine, I was thinking the ingredients would take up the whole screen…like a whole page for the ingredients. You could maybe increase the leading a little bit
- Preparation has a space after it but Ingredients doesn’t. Decide if you want to use a space or not.
- I think the headings for Ingredients and Preparation could increase point size.
- Step one has a widow (salt), but I don’t know how much that matters
- I like the tip with the italics, and the picture at the bottom
- Step 3 is really long…maybe condense that step.
- I like the way the 14 pt size looks on a laptop, but I’m thinking that if I was cooking, it might be too small on my phone. Consider going a little larger, and additionally making the headers larger